Saturday, August 13, 2011

50 word Story

Fred and Barney were sitting in a pub having a beer.  A young lady walked in and Fred made a remark about her large breasts. The young lady reminded Barney of his daughter and he didn’t take kindly to Fred’s remark.  He hit Fred with a beer bottle and left.

8 comments:

  1. Paige very funny story!! Was credable and I think anyone who had a daughter would relate!Thanks for making me laugh!

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  2. Question about the story. Was the beer bottle empty? because that would be a waste of beer....
    good story :-)

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  3. I really enjoyed your story. It reminded me that it is always important to think about what we say and who our audeince is. Good piece on communication.

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  4. This reminds me of a very amusing drank man in Galway, Ireland. I swear this story has happened in his real life. Your story was very funny... kind of proverb-like about appropriateness.

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  5. Not sure I understand the point of your story. Not that I don't understand the story. Enough information to be curious, not enough to make conclusions.

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  6. People in bars don't think about making a point, they are just in a given situation, with little thought as to the outcomes of their words or actions.

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  7. Paige,
    I certainly got a good laugh when reading this story. It reminds me of how some dads don’t like their daughters to have boyfriends because they remember how they acted around girls when they were younger! This mini-saga was nicely written and quite creative!

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